K-pop
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1. Are you a fan of the K-pop girl group BLACKPINK? Who is your favorite member and why?
- I\'m not a fan of the BLACKPINK. I know just one member of BLACKPINK. Her name is Jenny. I heard that she is most pretty and sings well in this group. Did you hear about 2NE1? 2NE1 and BLACK PINK belong to YG(YG is entertainment company). 2NE1 was previous K-pop girl group. 2NE1 and BLACKPINK are very similar. I liked the 2NE1.
2. What do you think K-pop will be like in the future? How can you/we make K-pop more famous around the world?
- I can\\\'t guess whether K-pop will remain popular in the future. I think that a good appearance of K-pop star and their amazing dance skill are major part of the popularity of K-pop. To make K-pop more famous, they must make a effort to improve their music.
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Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
I\'m not a fan of the BLACKPINK.
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I know just one member of BLACKPINK.
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Her name is Jenny.
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I heard that she is most pretty and sings well in this group.
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Did you hear about 2NE1?
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2NE1 and BLACK PINK belong to YG(YG is entertainment company).
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2NE1 was previous K-pop girl group.
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2NE1 and BLACKPINK are very similar.
>>CORRECT!
I liked the 2NE1.
>>CORRECT!
I can\'t guess whether K-pop will remain popular in the future.
>>CORRECT!
I think that a good appearance of K-pop star and their amazing dance skill are major part of the popularity of K-pop.
>> I think that a good appearance of K-pop star and their amazing dance skills are major part of the popularity of K-pop.
To make K-pop more famous, they must make a effort to improve their music.
>>To make K-pop more famous, they must make an effort to improve their music.
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