K-POP is very a proud Korea culture.
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I think that K-POP is a pround Korea culture. Actually i don\'t know young singers well like idol singers, but i know they are very popular all over the world. BTS, BLACK PINK, TWICE, WANNA ONE, and so on.... ,as you know, many singers are very famous. teenagers in korea work hard at fan clubs. They buy singers items and go to a concert and even they give their idols gifts that they bought.
most of k-pop idol singers\' songs are very powerful but actually i don\'t like loud music. so i usually listen to ballad music. Also they are very young, but i am a little old. So i am not interested in them. But i am sure that K-pop is very a pround korea culture and from anywhere i can say that \"I am korean, in my country there are many k-pop singers like BTS, Wanna One, Twice.\"
*Hi, Gina ~ i have a question. I don\'t know when to write capital letters or small letters. when you fix my answer, i would appreciate it if you let me know about this. Thank you ^_^
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Hello, [이름]!
Good afternoon and thank you for submitting your homework.
I really appreciate it. I totally agree that K-pop is one of the most popular culture nowadays.
Many people around the world really admire the idol groups from your country. ^^
Regarding your question, here are my answers:
- You have to capitalize the first letter of a word when it is the first word in a sentence.
- You also need to use capital letters for specific names of people, places and brands.
- Another is when you write a title of a book, stories, magazines, newspaper, articles, movies, poems and songs. (For example: Kingsman: The Secret Service)
- Finally, you need to always capitalize \'I\'.
There you go. ^^
I hope it helped. If you have any questions about it, you can always ask me on our next class.
~Teacher Gina
>> I think that K-pop is a proud Korean culture.
>> Or: I think that K-pop is a proud culture of Korea.
Actually i don\'t know young singers well like idol singers, but i know they are very popular all over the world.
>> Actually, I don\'t know young singers well like idol singers, but I know that they are very popular all over the world.
BTS, BLACK PINK, TWICE, WANNA ONE, and so on.... ,as you know, many singers are very famous.
>> BTS, BLACK PINK, TWICE, Wanna One, and so on... as you know, many singers are very famous.
teenagers in korea work hard at fan clubs.
>> Teenagers in Korea work hard at fan clubs.
They buy singers items and go to a concert and even they give their idols gifts that they bought.
>> They buy the singers\' items and go to a concert. They even give their idols gifts that they bought.
most of k-pop idol singers\' songs are very powerful but actually i don\'t like loud music. so i usually listen to ballad music.
>> Most K-pop idol singers\' songs are very powerful but I don\'t actually like loud music so I usually listen to ballad.
Also they are very young, but i am a little old.
>> Also, they are very young but I am a little old.
So i am not interested in them.
>> So I am not interested in them.
>> or: So I don\'t have any interest about them.
But i am sure that K-pop is very a pround korea culture and from anywhere i can say that \"I am korean, in my country there are many k-pop singers like BTS, Wanna One, Twice.\"
>> But I am sure that K-pop is a very proud Korean culture and from anywhere, I can say that, \" I am a Korean and there are many K-pop singers there like BTS, Wanna One and TWICE.\"
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