KaKaotalk!

2013-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I like KaKaotalk!!! I am very bored because of academy!! I want to play with my friends~~~ But Their schedule is different from mine! So, KaKaotalk help to talk each other~ And, If I get some data, I can chat with my friends on the phone! Also, it's free~~~~~~~ So, I love KaKaotalk forevor~~^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there! A happy Monday to you!^^
Thank you for sending this in.
I am truly happy because you allotted some time to complete this one.
For your questions, in case there are, I will gladly answer them in class.
Enjoy your day! See you.^^

I like KaKaotalk!!!

>>Correct!
I am very bored because of academy!!

>>I get bored whenever I go to the academy.
I want to play with my friends~~~

>>Correct!
But Their schedule is different from mine!
>>Correct! [capitalization]

So, KaKaotalk help to talk each other~

>>So Kakaotalk is a means for us to talk with each other.

>>So Kakaotalk is one of our means of communication.
And, If I get some data, I can chat with my friends on the phone!
>>Correct!

Also, it\'s free~~~~~~~

>>Correct!
So, I love KaKaotalk forevor~~^^

>>So I will love Kakaotalk forever!^^

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