Karen~ It's [이름] :)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! First of all thanks for sending in a composition. This is your first composition, right? Hurray! (^__^) You're composition is really really interesting. I also like watching 'Chuck' (I think he is charming) and of course, 'How I met your mother', I think we have the same favorite character, we both like Barney! He is so adorable and funny! Haha. Anyway, if you have time, just send in more compositions and I will be very glad to read them. Talk to you later! ^^.
~t.Karen (>o<)
Make a composition about your favorite movie. Try to explain what the story is about and why it is your favorite movie of all time! Have fun writing
I am not a movie person so I am going to tell you about shows I am in love with right now.
>> Correct!
First of all Chuck from ABC is my favorite in that it combines two different genres. thriller and commedy.
>> First of all Chuck from ABC is my favorite for the reason that/ because it combines two different genres: thriller and commedy.
It has two different but important sets respectively and the characters in the show has different issues.
>> It has two different but important sets respectively and the characters in the show have different issues.
The most interesting part is that Chuck, who connects both parties, is becoming a real spy.
>> Correct!
At first he was a total mess but as seasons progress, he becomes an awesome ninja and I love it.
>> Correct!
Also you have to make sure that the love-line between Chuck and Sara is so unsecure which makes it more interesting.
>> Correct!
Secondly How I Met Your Mother is also an attractive one.
>> Correct! Or
>> Secondly How I Met Your Mother is also an interesting one.
That is a story of how Ted, a main character of the show, met his fiance but still I cannot find even a clue.
>> That is a story of how Ted, the main character of the show, met his fiance but still I cannot find even one clue to guess who his fiance is.
You have to know that it is going to be almost 8 season!@@
>> You have to know that it is almost the 8th season!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.