Karen~ It's [이름] :)
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[이름]! First of all, let me congratulate you for doing a good job. You've been exerting so much effort in your studies (including French) that is why I am so proud of you. And yes, you are correct, you are getting there (hurray!). ^^, Please don't get tired of studying, if you feel like you want to stop, just pause, take a rest and carry on, but don't ever quit. I am happy to have you as a friend. I hope you pass the exam. I will be always cheering for you! ^___^ Actually I know someone who's also going to take the same exam as you, her is planning to join KATUSA as well. I'll tell you all about it tomorrow okay? For now, have a wonderful rest tonight! Sweet dreams [이름]!
~t.Karen >.<
What makes 2012 special?
>> Correct!
Well first of all, I have to go KATUSA(Korean Augmentation Troops to the United States Army) in july.
>> Well first of all, I have to go to the KATUSA(Korean Augmentation Troops to the United States Army) in July.
I think that is the most important part of this year and I am expecting that, in there, I can learn English.
>> I think that is the most important part of this year and I am expecting to learn English there.
Furthermore I can eat their delicious food everyday and use a lot of luxurious facilities all the time including simming pools, hotel rooms, an auditorium, a country club... etc..
>> Furthermore, I can eat their delicious food everyday and I can use a lot of luxurious facilities all the time including swimming pools, hotel rooms, an auditorium, a country club, etc.
There are lots of, tons of advantages that I cannot describe in words.
>> There are lots of advantages that I cannot describe in words.
Or
>> There are tons of advantages that I cannot describe in words.
Especially In Korea, being KATUSA means many people think your future is guaranteed somehow.
>> In Korea, being a KATUSA means many people think that your future is somehow guaranteed.
Secondly like I said at all times, I am learning French and I just bought two French books which is harder than old ones. ( A1 -> A2 )
>> Secondly like I've been saying, I am learning French and I just bought two French books which are harder than the old ones. ( A1 -> A2 )
This improvement seems nice for me because I have to take the test named DELF B1 within 3 months..
>> This improvement seems nice for me because I have to take the test called DELF B1 within 3 months..
Though I have fluctuated a lot, I think I am getting there :P.
>> Correct!
Or
>> Though I have been fluctuating a lot, I think I am getting there.
Lastly I may have a chance to meet you in person.
>> Correct!
Whether it will happen or not, I\'m just anticipating :)
>> Correct!
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