Karen~ It's [이름] :)

What is the most valuable/ important lesson that you have learned so far? I think the most valuable lesson in my entire life is that I have to be more active when it comes to studying languages. When I was in high school I did not try so hard. I just tried to remember words and if I got good points that was all. The end of the story. However now, I think I have to be more participative. :) At the same time, I realize that I should not be greedy. As far as I am concerned I, sometimes, want so many things. For example, I tend to memorize a lot of words at the same time which makes me distracted. As a result I cannot remember any words @@. Also I am trying to make more complicated sentences and because of that, I easily lose my concentration.. so maybe I have to be careful about those mistakes.

Hello [이름]! Thanks so much for sending in your composition! Yes, I am happy that you made that realization yourself without anyone telling you. I am so proud of you ^O^. You should also remember that learning does not need to be rushed, it is taken slowly with ease. Sometimes the basic lessons make you learn more. Jumping straight ahead to complicated things don't always help.  Knowing yourself more can actually be your strongest weapon someday ^^,  I'll be cheering on you! Good night! And talk to you again tomorrow! Sweet dreams (^___^)

~t.Karen ^.^

What is the most valuable/ important lesson that you have learned so far?

>> Correct!

 I think the most valuable lesson in my entire life is that I have to be more active when it comes to studying languages.

>> Correct!

When I was in high school I did not try so hard.

>> Correct!

I just tried to remember words and if I got good points that was all.

>> I just tried to remember words and if I got good points then that was all.

The end of the story.

>> That's the end of my story.

Or

>> End of story.

 However now, I think I have to be more participative. :)

>> Correct!

 At the same time, I realize that I should not be greedy.

>> Correct!

As far as I am concerned I, sometimes, want so many things.

>> Correct grammar! Check our the placement of the comma [ , ] :

>> As far as I am concerned, I sometimes want so many things.

For example, I tend to memorize a lot of words at the same time which makes me distracted.

>> Correct!

 As a result I cannot remember any words @@.

>> As a result I cannot remember any word.

Also I am trying to make more complicated sentences and because of that, I easily lose my concentration..so maybe I have to be careful about those mistakes.

>> Correct!