Karen~ It's [이름] :)
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Would you consider undergoing plastic surgery in the future?
I was considering it very seriously because, in the world of gay, superficial things are so important. I usually get two assessments. One day, all of the people in a meeting love me which usually made me arrogant. Unfortunately, another day people can't recognize me.
The up and down of my popularity always has made me so insecure.
When I realized the situation, all of a sudden I became so weak.
So I had to find other things that can protect my self-confidence and one of them was studying langagues. As a result now, I am kinna satisfied with this as studying isn't treacherous at all.
In conclusion I am problem-free in the matter of plastic surgery because I know something better than that. Working hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! How was your weekend? ^.^ I hope you had a great one! Well, anyway, thanks for sending your thoughts on plastic surgery. I do commend you for channeling your energy in a positive way! It is true that we all have imperfections, especially with the media trying to push its own definition of what is supposed to be \"Beautiful\". Despite the blinding figures we see on the television, you never failed to see the beauty that is in you, and you refuse to give in to the superficial kind of beauty. ^o^ Remember, the imperfections that we have are what sets us apart from the 6 billion people in the world. (^__^) Hurray for being beautiful inside and out. I\'ll talk to you soon ~t.Karen >o<
Would you consider undergoing plastic surgery in the future?
>> Correct!
I was considering it very seriously because, in the world of gay, superficial things are so important.
>> Correct!
I was considering it very seriously because, in the world of gay, superficial things are so important.
>>I was considering it very seriously because in the world of gays, superficial things are so important.
>>I was considering it very seriously because for gays, superficial things are so important.
I usually get two assessments.
>> Correct!
One day, all of the people in a meeting love me which usually made me arrogant.
>>One day, all of the people in a meeting loved me which usually made me arrogant.
Unfortunately, another day people can\'t recognize me.
>>
Unfortunately, there are days when people couldn\'t recognize me.
The up and down of my popularity always has made me so insecure.
The up and down of my popularity always has made me so insecure.
>>
The ups and downs of my popularity has always made me so insecure.
When I realized the situation, all of a sudden I became so weak.
When I realized the situation, all of a sudden I became so weak.
>> Correct!
So I had to find other things that can protect my self-confidence and one of them was studying langagues.
So I had to find other things that can protect my self-confidence and one of them was studying langagues.
>> Correct! But do try to be careful when typing ^.^ (languages)
As a result now, I am kinna satisfied with this as studying isn\'t treacherous at all.
>> Correct!
In conclusion I am problem-free in the matter of plastic surgery because I know something better than that.
In conclusion I am problem-free in the matter of plastic surgery because I know something better than that.
>> Correct!
Working hard.
>> Correct!
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