Kart Rider.
학생이 쓴 원문
Tomorrow, my mom will buy Kart Rider items for me!
I 'm still thinking what should I buy or should I just keep the money to buy a big thing.
Well...... I have a really expensive car named rodi bairon. (On game)
When I use a booster to this car, it goes really fast and even changes like a transformer car!!
I hope I will have the coolest item.
강사 첨삭
Let me congratulate you again for getting a perfect score on your math test. I hope you make up your mind on your dilemma about your money. Enjoy your Saturday!^^ -Teacher JM
Tomorrow, my mom will buy Kart Rider items for me!
>>>CorrectI 'm still thinking what should I buy or should I just keep the money to buy a big thing.
>>>I 'm still thinking whether I should buy or just keep the money to buy a big thing.Well...... I have a really expensive car named rodi bairon. (On game)
>>>CorrectWhen I use a booster to this car, it goes really fast and even changes like a transformer car!!
>>>CorrectI hope I will have the coolest item.
>>>I hope that I will have the coolest item.
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