Keep a happy marriage

2013-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The most important key in keeping a happy marriage is respecting your significant other, accepting your spouse the way as he/she is without trying to get him/her to change as you like him/her to be and making concessions. These are typical and stereotype answers to the question about the happy marriage. But, in reality, in order for you to keep a happy marriage, especially as a husband in Korea, you should give up a lot of things such as your hobbies, working hard at home, studying during the weekends, even spending time to develop your career and the solo lifestyle you have enjoyed before getting married. After marriage, even you shouldn’t be a good son. If you are, it will become a big huddle to the happy marriage. The most serious and common conflict you have with your wife is how you and your wife are behaving toward your parents and your in-laws. You should treat your in-laws as you treat your own parents or sometimes even the way better. Otherwise you will be in trouble.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir [이름]^^ Wow! I learned something from you today.^^ I really had a great time reading your composition. You are right! Respect is really an important factor to have a happy marriage. ^^ Thank you for spending some time to do your homework. See you in class! Teacher Nina The most important key in keeping a happy marriage is respecting your significant other, accepting your spouse the way as he/she is without trying to get him/her to change as you like him/her to be and making concessions. >> The most important key in keeping a happy marriage is respecting your significant other, accepting your spouse the way he/she is without trying to change the way you like him/her to be and making concessions. These are typical and stereotype answers to the question about the happy marriage. >> These are typical and stereotype answers to the question about happy marriage. But, in reality, in order for you to keep a happy marriage, especially as a husband in Korea, you should give up a lot of things such as your hobbies, working hard at home, studying during the weekends, even spending time to develop your career and the solo lifestyle you have enjoyed before getting married. >> Correct! >> OR: But in reality, in order for you to keep a happy marriage, especially as a husband in Korea, you should give up a lot of things such as your hobbies, working hard at home, studying during the weekends, even spending time to develop your career and the lifestyle you had before getting married. After marriage, even you shouldn’t be a good son. >> After marriage, you shouldn\'t be a good son. >> OR: After getting married. you should also give up being a good son to your parents. If you are, it will become a big huddle to the happy marriage. >> If you are, it will become a big huddle to a happy marriage. The most serious and common conflict you have with your wife is how you and your wife are behaving toward your parents and your in-laws. >> Correct! You should treat your in-laws as you treat your own parents or sometimes even the way better. >> Correct! >> OR: You should treat your in-laws as you treat your own parents or sometimes even better. Otherwise you will be in trouble. >> Correct!

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