keep on thouch
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I keep on touch to my friends. but I frequently can't keep on touch.
Because my work is finished late and so I have not enough even time with my boy friend.
My almost friends is married about ago 2 years, each they have had one baby.
So They are busy, too. and they are hard to move far distance for caring their baby.
We meet about twice for a year.
They are school friends.
Instead I call them a little more frequently.
I have other group friends.
It's catholic church.
They live near place.
I frequently meet them than school friends.
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Hello Susan!
Thank you for sending me your composition.
It\'s nice to know about your school friends and other friends.
Don\'t forget to review the corrections I\'ve made.
Take care
Teacher Faye
Yes, I keep on touch to my friends.
>> Yes, I keep in touch with my friends.
but I frequently can\'t keep on touch.
>> But most of the time, I don\'t have the chance to see them.Because my work is finished late and so I have not enough even time with my boy friend.
>> This is because my work finishes late. I don\'t have enough time to see them, not even my boyfriend.My almost friends is married about ago 2 years, each they have had one baby.
>> Most of my friends got married for the past two years. Each had their own baby.So They are busy, too.
>> So, they are busy too.
and they are hard to move far distance for caring their baby.
>> It\'s not easy for them to be distant from their babies because they\'re caring for them.We meet about twice for a year.
>> We meet about twice a year.They are school friends.
>> They are my school friends.Instead I call them a little more frequently.
>> I instead call them as frequent as I can.I have other group friends.
>> I have another group of friends.It\'s catholic church.
>> They belong to the Catholic Church.They live near place.
>> They live near my place.I frequently meet them than school friends.
>> I meet them more frequently than my school friends.
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