Keep our body healthy!
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Keeping our body healthy or maintaining a healthy lifestyle is not only important but essential. Because if we don\'t keep our bodies healthy, we\'ll get sick, and then we\'ll have a hard time sustaining our lives. We need to stay healthy to live a long, long life without getting sick.
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Hello Sheila! I hope you will have a great weekend ^^ Enjoy your time with your friends! ~ T.Gelly
Keeping our body healthy or maintaining a healthy lifestyle is not only important but essential.
>> Correct!
Because if we don\'t keep our bodies healthy, we\'ll get sick, and then we\'ll have a hard time sustaining our lives.
>> Correct!
We need to stay healthy to live a long, long life without getting sick.
>> We need to stay healthy to live a longer life without getting ill.
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