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2016-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Whenever you need to make up your mind, what do you do? When i need to decide something, I conclude slowly, carefully but once i think that is correct, i act fast and push ahead. For examples,, when i bought a house, i researched a lot. Sometimes it took over a year. but if anything didn't make me satisfied, i wouldn't make a contranct. but sometimes i could find good things, then i decided to contract more less than a day, even it was a big deal. + What can you say about the clip "Parable of the Talents"? ^_^ I was afaid of my own shadow when i saw that animation. Laziness is bad, but i don't know it is right judging a person by a result. The winners take all or more.. Do you think that is beauiful? I used to think that is pair. But now i don't know anymore.

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This is it, my dear [이름]! I am glad you really check everything that I share with you. You just made my heart flutter. I hope that you find all these materials useful for your improvement. You have shared a lot again, so two thumbs up! I am excited to speak with you again. For now, I\'ll let you go, so you can finish many tasks. Until our next chat, [이름]! Take it easy there. -Klein- Whenever you need to make up your mind, what do you do?When i need to decide something, I conclude slowly, carefully but once i think that is correct, i act fast and push ahead.>>When I need to decide on something, I conclude slowly and carefully; but once I think that is correct, I act fast and push ahead. For examples,, when i bought a house, i researched a lot. >>For example, when I bought a house, I researched a lot. Sometimes it took over a year. >>Some time, it took over a year. but if anything didn\'t make me satisfied, i wouldn\'t make a contranct. >>But if anything didn\'t make me satisfied, I wouldn\'t make a contract. but sometimes i could find good things, then i decided to contract more less than a day, even it was a big deal.>>But sometimes, I could find good things, then I decided to contract no more less than a day, even though it was a big deal.+ What can you say about the clip \"Parable of the Talents\"? ^_^ I was afaid of my own shadow when i saw that animation. >>CorrectLaziness is bad, but i don\'t know it is right judging a person by a result. >>Laziness is bad, but I don\'t know whether it is right to judge a person by a result.The winners take all or more.. Do you think that is beauiful? >>CorrectI used to think that is pair. >>I used to think that is fair. But now i don\'t know anymore. >>Correct

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