Kelly

2018-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Dr. [Name] have you been? I just arrived in Irvine. The weather here in Irvine is beautiful. I havent’ heard from Ms. [Name] yet. I don’t want to bother you, but would you tell her again, please? There was a little bit problem to get a slide recut specimen in our hospital. Differences in opinion between IRB, human origin resource bank, and pathology are delaying sample collection. So I came but my slide didn’t came with me. At present, they are coordinating their opinion., so I will get the specimen in a month and my residents will send the recut slide here.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름]! It\'s nice to know that you arrived in Irvine safely. Please check your revised letter below. See you ! -Amanda ^-^


YOUR LETTER:

Hello Dr. [Name]

How have you been?

I just arrived in Irvine. The weather here in Irvine is beautiful.

I havent’ heard from Ms. [Name] yet.

I don’t want to bother you, but would you tell her again, please?

There was a little bit problem to get a slide recut specimen in our hospital.
Differences in opinion between IRB, human origin resource bank, and pathology are delaying sample collection.
So I came but my slide didn’t came with me. At present, they are coordinating their opinion., so I will get the specimen in a month and my residents will send the recut slide here.


REVISED:

Hello Dr. [Name],

How have you been?

I just arrived in Irvine. The weather here is beautiful. I haven\'t heard from Ms. [Name] yet. I hate to bother you, but would you tell her again, please?

There was a little problem in getting a slide recut specimen in our hospital. Differences in opinion between IRB, human origin resource bank, and pathology are delaying sample collection, so I came here without my slide. They are currently coordinating with each other to come to a consensus, so I will get the specimen in a month and my residents will send the recut slide here.


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