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I'm going to write my memorable trip. I have been India in 2010 because I observed the world contest about social enterprise. I had chance to join this contest but I chose a observer. Anyway,I stayed a graduate school in Hyderabad,India during the trip. That school is very modernistic. In there, many participants contested for receiving a prize. But I enjoyed during that time because I was just observer. I looked on castle of Golconda and a huge and old marketplace in there. That places are very ethnic. When I went to Golconda, I was impressed with exotic landscape. And when I went to the marketplace, there are a namber of people and cars so, it was very congestion. I was able to feel like I came back 100 years ago. I think India is country coexisting with present and past.

Hello Ms. [이름]! I had fun reading your compositions today. Take care and see you in class tomorrow. T. Kelly I'm going to write my memorable trip. >> I'm going to write about my memorable trip.I have been India in 2010 because I observed the world contest about social enterprise. >> I have been to India in 2010 because I observed a worldwide contest about social enterprise.I had chance to join this contest but I chose a observer. >> I had a chance to join the contest, but I chose to be an observer.Anyway,I stayed a graduate school in Hyderabad,India during the trip. >> Anyway, during the trip, I stayed at a Graduate School in Hyberdad, India.That school is very modernistic. >> That school is very modern.In there, many participants contested for receiving a prize. >> Many participants competed to receive a prize.But I enjoyed during that time because I was just observer. >> But I enjoyed my time because I was just an observer.I looked on castle of Golconda and a huge and old marketplace in there. >> I looked at the castle of Golconda and there was a huge and old marketplace there. That places are very ethnic. >> Those are ethnic places.When I went to Golconda, I was impressed with exotic landscape. >> When I went to Golconda, I was impressed with the exotic landscape.And when I went to the marketplace, there are a namber of people and cars so, it was very congestion. >> When I went to the market, there were many people and the traffic was congested.I was able to feel like I came back 100 years ago. >> Correct.I think India is country coexisting with present and past. >> I think India is a country co-existing with the present and the past.