KIA tigers contract with old player
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KIA tigers contract with old player.
>> KIA tigers had a contract with the old players.
It was not really much.So,KIA will contract with Yang Hyeon Jong and Kim Joo Chan.
>> They didn\'t have a contract with a lot of players or most players, so KIA tigers will have a contract with Yang Hyeon Jong and Kim Joo Chan again.
Then,it will be perfect winter.KIA Tigers many pitchers went to KIA Tigers after went to military.So, KIA will challenging ranking 1 again.
>> Then, it will be a perfect winter. The team has many pitchers who went to KIA Tigers after their military service, so KIA will be the number 1 challenger again.
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