KIA Tigers new uniform
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강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
This is an exciting news about your favorite team!
Thank you for sharing this to me.
I know Kim Ju Chan will look great with his new uniform. ^^
Let\'s look forward to the new season.
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
KIA Tigers new uniform was made.KIA Tigers network showed about new uniform.
>> KIA Tigers\' new uniform was made and their network showed about it.
Kim Ju Chan and Yang Hyeon Jong and Im chang young wore new uniforms.
>> Kim Ju Chan, Yang Hyeon Jong, and Im [Name] Young wore their new uniforms.
The team\'s logo is different.And it sounds wonderful.
>> The team\'s logo is different and it sounds wonderful.
KIA Tigers made the decision Team 2020 when it made.
>> KIA Tigers made the decision to make Team 2020.
KIA Tigers will start new season with new logo and newuniform.
>> KIA Tigers will start the new season with a new logo and a new uniform.
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