KIA tigers news 2
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KIA Tigers are really different this year.KIA Tigers win 23times and lose just 10times.And they are at 1.All batters except Kim Joo Chan play an important role in KIA Tigers.
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Hi, [이름]!
Congratulations to your favorite team!
They are on top maybe because the players are all great.
Thank you for sharing about Kia Tigers.
Have a good night and a nice weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
KIA Tigers are really different this year.
>> KIA Tigers members are really different this year.
KIA Tigers win 23times and lose just 10times.And they are at 1.
>> KIA Tigers won 23 times and lost just 10 times. The team is on top.
>> or: KIA Tigers won 23 times and lost just 10 times and that made them number 1.
All batters except Kim Joo Chan play an important role in KIA Tigers.
>> correct
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