Kill your enemy with kindness.

2010-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday, you know I was sick. I got a tonsillitis. Because I slept in the cold room shivering with cold. When I arrived my office my face was pale and my dean's face was paler than me with anger. He stared calling director up like mad and then no one answered the call because it is quite early. Then he took it out on me . It was so absurd that I was speechless. I always think 'Why Is him so annoying?' His personality is one thing. Businesslike relation is another. So when I went home I gave him two mandarins which was samll and cute, with a memo which was wriiten ' Please eat and stop being mad ^^' with smile. I think all of people want to get attention. He might think authoritative manner makes him a respectable boss.

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! How are you feeling now? I am so sorry to hear about what happened yesterday. I think your boss is having andropause (male menopause). ^^ ha ha ha What do you think? He's always bad tempered and it is wrong to vent it out to other people. It's unprofessional to do that. Well just be patient and get well dear. I hope you're already well and good upon talking to you tomorrow. Take care!!!Lei J Yesterday, you know I was sick. >>correct I got a tonsillitis.>>correctBecause I slept in the cold room shivering with cold.>>Because I slept in a room where I was shivering with cold.When I arrived my office my face was pale and my dean's face was paler than me with anger.>>When I arrived at my office, my face was pale but my dean's faces was paler because of anger.He stared calling director up like mad and then no one answered the call because it is quite early.>>He started calling the director madly but no one answered because it is quite early.Then he took it out on me .>>Then he vented it out on me.It was so absurd that I was speechless.>>correctI always think 'Why Is him so annoying?'>> I always think why is he so annoying?His personality is one thing. >>correct Businesslike relation is another.>>Professionalism is another.So when I went home I gave him two mandarins which were small and cute and a memo which written  Please eat and stop being mad ^^' with a smiley.>>correctI think all of people want to get attention.>>I think all people want to get some attention.He might think authoritative manner makes him a respectable boss. >>He might think being authoritative makes him a respectable boss.

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