Kim Joo Chan and Yang hyeon jong
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KIA tigers will contract with both of players.With Yang Hyeon Jeong they will contract will soon.But,with kim joo chan may be it will be hard because of his age.But,he is good player.And he will stay KIA tigers.
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Hi, [이름]!
Oh my!
So sad to know about that of Kim Joo Chan. T_T
Thank you for updating me. ^^
Have a good night!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
KIA tigers will contract with both of players.With Yang Hyeon Jeong they will contract will soon.But,with kim joo chan may be it will be hard because of his age.But,he is good player.And he will stay KIA tigers.
>> Yang Hyeon Jeong will have a contract with KIA Tigers soon, but with Kim Joo Chan, maybe it will be hard for them because of his age. He is a good player and he will stay with KIA Tigers.
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