Kimchi is a representative food of Korea.
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Kimchi is a representative food of Korea.
I think that kimchi is one of the representative food of Korea.
>>I think that kimchi is one of the representative foods in Korea.
We make various kinds of Kimchi on Kim gang day for one year every winter.
>>We make various kinds of Kimchi on Kim gang day every winter that would last for one year.
We make them with cabbages, radishes and green onions.
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or>>It contains several ingredients such as cabbages, radishes and green onions.
And we cook many kinds of cuisine like kimchi soup, kimchi fried rice, kimchi pork zzim and so on using the old kimchi.
>>And we cook many kinds of cuisine like kimchi soup, kimchi fried rice, kimchi pork zzim and so on using the aged or fermented kimchi.
Also Many korean even have their own refrigerator only for kimchi.
>>Also, many Koreans even have their refrigerators which are made only for kimchi.
They keep kimchi there for a few years.
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or>>They store the kimchi inside even for several years.
And of course I also have kimchi of 3 years old, 2 years old and 1 year old like wine.
>>And, of course, I also have a 3-year-old, a 2-year-old and a 1-year-old kimchi just like a bottle of wine.
At this point, we couldn\'t help but admit kimchi is a representative food of korea.
>>At this point, we couldn\'t deny but admit that kimchi is a representative food of Korea.
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