Kindergarten
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jenny, this is a really sweet and heartwarming answer! I can feel how much you enjoyed your childhood memories, especially playing happily after kindergarten. You expressed your thoughts so clearly, and your sentence shows great improvement. I’m really proud of your progress, and I believe you can express even more beautiful stories as you keep practicing.
~Teacher Cathy
If I could travel back in time, I would go back to kindergarten, because after kindergarten I always went to the playground and played happily.
>>If I could travel back in time, I
would go back to kindergarten, because after school I always went to the
playground and played happily.
OR>> If I could travel back in time, I would return to kindergarten,
since I used to go to the playground afterward and play joyfully.
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