Kindly answer the following in essay form. Are there any activities that you used to do but don’t do
학생이 쓴 원문
I was doing Taekwondo but now I don\'t.
I did Taekwondo with my frineds for 6 years but because of Covid19, it is not able to do it.
But I want to do it again.
I had many great grades about Taekwondo so I want to do it again.
So if this pendemic stop, I am going to do it again with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
I didn\'t know that you did Taekwondo. That is actually a great skill to attain. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
I was doing Taekwondo but now I don\'t.
>> I did Taekwondo before but now I don\'t anymore.
I did Taekwondo with my frineds for 6 years but because of Covid19, it is not able to do it.
>> I used to do it with my friends for 6 years but because of COVID-19, we are not able to do it anymore.
But I want to do it again.
>> CORRECT
I had many great grades about Taekwondo so I want to do it again.
>> My performance was good in my Taekwondo lessons so I want to do it again.
So if this pendemic stop, I am going to do it again with my friends.
>> So when this pandemic is over, I will do it again with my friends.
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