Kindly compare and contrast the way of your life with that of your parents.
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I prefer my life as my kids\' parent although I just witnessed my parents\' life as their kid.
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First of all, I didn\'t have to prepare a lot of dishes for my kids\' lunch boxes because they could go to school cafeteria at lunch time.
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On the other hand, my mother had to make four lunch boxes for my siblings and me every morning, along with preparing breakfast.
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She used to make many kinds of side dishes fit to lunch box every Saturday when I was a high school student and my youngest brother was an elementary student.
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At that time, most school didn\'t have any facilities such as cafeteria.
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Finally most mothers had to spend much time making food for their kids\' brown bags.
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However, my mother didn\'t have to take her kids to private institutes late at night because a school work would be enough for her kids\' going to good university.
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Therefore, most parents didn\'t have to worry about tuition fee so that they could save money for their retirement.
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