Kindly explain your family in your own words. Make at least 6 or more sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
My dad is sometimes angry at something but he is very benevolent.
He thought me how to look something with a lot of perspectives.
My mom is really kind and she always smile to us.
So I think it is really comfortable to me to talk with my mom.
My brother is sometimes annoying but he is one of my good friends.
I can talk with him freely because I can treat him like my friends.
And I think I am mood maker.
I can make my house mood great or bad (bad is when I am mad at something or sad).
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
You play such an important role in your family. You have a wonderful family by the way. :)
My dad is sometimes angry at something but he is very benevolent.
>> CORRECT
He thought me how to look something with a lot of perspectives.
>> He taught me to look at something in different perspectives.
My mom is really kind and she always smile to us.
>> My mom is really kind and she always smiles at us.
So I think it is really comfortable to me to talk with my mom.
>> I feel more comfortable when I talk with my mom.
My brother is sometimes annoying but he is one of my good friends.
>> My brother is sometimes annoying but he is one of my good friends.
I can talk with him freely because I can treat him like my friends.
>>I can talk with him freely because I can treat him like my friend.
And I think I am mood maker.
>> I think I am a mood maker.
I can make my house mood great or bad (bad is when I am mad at something or sad)
>> I can make the mood of the house good or bad. It gets bad when I am in a bad mood.)
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