Kindly write about a positive experience with learning or using English.

Good morning Jason^^

It is so kind of you to say that you gained a lot from your peers.^^

Luckily, you have an open mind, so everything is okay^^

First of all, I have met plenty of friends who have different cultures.

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 Even if we couldn’t speak English well each other, we shared our cultures regarding positive and negative things.

>>Even if we couldn’t speak English well with each other, we shared positive and negative things regarding our culture.

 I have experienced when I was in overseas such as the Philippines, Taiwanese, India, Canada, Malaysia and etc…

>> I experienced it when I was in abroad such as the Philippines, Taiwanese, India, Canada, Malaysia and etc.

Hence, my knowledge and skills have been improved how to understand and adjust with the others.
>>Hence, my knowledge and skills how to understand and adjust with others have been improved.
Second of all, I can watch and read a little regarding economics or issues.

>>Second of all, I can watch and read a little regarding economics or various issues.

 Thus, I can see Korea from different views through newspapers which are written by the other countries.

>>Thus, I can see Korea from different views through newspapers which are written by other countries.
It’s important to see various opinions since, sometimes, broadcast news may make fake things for their profit.

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Korean have experienced about Sewol-ship which had a terrible tragedy.
>>Korean have experienced a tragedy with Sewol Ship.
Last of all, I am not afraid to go abroad anymore since I can speak English a little.

>>Lastly, I am not afraid to go abroad anymore since I can speak English a little.

I might ask to find direction, buy something to eat, and get help from the others.

>>I might ask to find direction, buy something to eat, and get help from others.