Kinds of Videos That I Watch on Youtube and Reasons Why I Enjoy Them
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I\'m not sure, but I was 17 years old when I started to enjoy watching Youtube for the first time. Youtube existed before, but I didn\'t have any interest in watching it. However, one day I heard ASMR whose sound makes me comfortable. I listened to it every night to have a good sleep. I think the reason why I heard it for every day was I needed something snug since I got stressed from studying awfully. By taking this opportunity, I began to search for many videos and I found out that watching other people\'s daily lives arouse sympathy while some experiencing unusual moments at the same time. Those are called \'Vlog\'. It also made me feel cozy like AMSR! Moreover, it satisfies visual desire, not only auditory desire since many Youtubers try to make high-quality videos. I also get a good influence from them when Youtubers live productive and diligent lives. For example, one of my favorite Youtubers did pilates for a long time, and I registered for it and keep going for 3 months!
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You\'re always so good at sharing stories. ^^
I commend you for your efforts!
Keep up the good work, Su [이름]!
~t. Ally
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I\'m not sure, but I was 17 years old when I started to enjoy watching Youtube for the first time.
>> CORRECT!
Youtube existed before, but I didn\'t have any interest in watching it.
>> CORRECT!
However, one day I heard ASMR whose sound makes me comfortable.
>> However, one day I heard ASMR, of which sounds makes me comfortable.
I listened to it every night to have a good sleep.
>> CORRECT!
I think the reason why I heard it for every day was I needed something snug since I got stressed from studying awfully.
>> I think the reason why I listened to it every day was because I needed something snug since I got stressed from studying awfully much.
By taking this opportunity, I began to search for many videos and I found out that watching other people\'s daily lives arouse sympathy while some experiencing unusual moments at the same time.
>> CORRECT!
Those are called \'Vlog\'.
>> Those are called \'Vlogs\'.
It also made me feel cozy like AMSR!
>> CORRECT!
Moreover, it satisfies visual desire, not only auditory desire since many Youtubers try to make high-quality videos.
>> CORRECT!
I also get a good influence from them when Youtubers live productive and diligent lives.
>> CORRECT!
For example, one of my favorite Youtubers did pilates for a long time, and I registered for it and keep going for 3 months!
>> CORRECT!
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