King crab is too much expensive.

2019-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I have been to a restaurant in Ulsan city about 4 years ago. I went to there with my co-worker and ate king crab. I had heard that king crab is very expensive. So I had never ate the food. At the first time when I tasted the crab, it was very soft and delicious. I never forget the flavor. But I think that is too expensive to eat usual. So if I have chance to treat dinner for precious people, I wish to have king crab together.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing [이름]! Sounds like it\'s very delicious. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I have been to a restaurant in Ulsan city about 4 years ago.

>> CORRECT

OR >> 4 years ago, I went to a restaurant in Ulsan City.

I went to there with my co-worker and ate king crab.

>> I went there with my co-worker and ate king crab.

I had heard that king crab is very expensive.

So I had never ate the food.

>> I have heard that king crab is very expensive so I didn\'t try to eat one.

At the first time when I tasted the crab, it was very soft and delicious.

>> When I tasted the crab for the first time, it was very soft and delicious.

I never forget the flavor. 

>> CORRECT
 But I think that is too expensive to eat usual. 

>>  But I think that it is too expensive. 
 o if I have chance to treat dinner for precious people, I wish to have king crab together.

>> So if I have a chance to treat precious people for dinner, I wish we have a king crab to eat together.

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