King sejong is genius

2024-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Are there any other languages that you would like to learn? >>> I wouldn\'t like to learn any languages except for English. Because English is nationally designated language, I need to learn. I know that there are many foreigners who are studying Korean language because Hangeul is well-made letter. King sejong invented it and it is still being recognized in the world. I\'m feeling so proud of it. I think, in my opinion, there is no better letter than Hangeul Therefore I don\'t need to learn another language.

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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

Are there any other languages that you would like to learn?

>>> I wouldn\'t like to learn any languages except for English. 
>> CORRECT!
Because English is nationally designated language, I need to learn.
>> That\'s because English is nationally a designated language that I need to learn.
I know that there are many foreigners who are studying Korean language because Hangeul is a well-made letter.
>> CORRECT!
King sejong invented it and it is still being recognized in the world. 
>> CORRECT!
I\'m feeling so proud of it.
>> CORRECT!
I think, in my opinion, there is no better letter than Hangeul.
>> I think, in my opinion, there is no better alphabet than Hangeul.
Therefore I don\'t need to learn another language.
>> CORRECT!

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