Kinship and friendship
학생이 쓴 원문
The difference of these is apparent to me. Whenever on special occasions, I am aware of my relatives. But I don\'t usually think about them. In the past, we lived close to our relatives in the countryside. Those days we kept in touch with them. After our family moved to Seoul, we didn\'t often contact each other .
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for finishing your homework!
See you tomorrow~
See you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel
The difference of these is apparent to me.
>> Correct!
OR: The distinction between these is obvious to me.
OR: The distinction between these is obvious to me.
Whenever on special occasions, I am aware of my relatives.
>> I am mindful of my relatives on special occasions.
But I don\'t usually think about them.
>> Correct!
In the past, we lived close to our relatives in the countryside.
>> We used to live in the countryside, close to our relatives.
Those days we kept in touch with them.
>> Correct!
OR: We stayed in touch with them back then.
OR: We stayed in touch with them back then.
After our family moved to Seoul, we didn\'t often contact each other .
>> Correct!
OR: We didn\'t talk much after our family moved to Seoul.
OR: We didn\'t talk much after our family moved to Seoul.
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