kk teacher, look at this.

2012-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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WORD OF THE DAY: "SALVAGE"- verb Pronunciation: [pruh-nuhn-see-ey-shuhn] Meaning: The act of saving anything from danger, fire etc. kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk Look at your pronunciation writing. You wrote pronunciation's pronunciation.kkkkkkk You are so funny! kkkkkkkkkk In addition, I didn't tell you a thing more and your last Friday's feedback word "ENTICE" was the same to your feedback's word the day before.kkkkkkk Why did you the same word? kk Are you lazy? kkkkkkkk I just kidding you. kk It's so funny. See you funny teacher! ^^

강사 첨삭

[이름]!!! KKKKKK  T-T I made an embarrassing mistake hahaha. It\'s because I am hungry! I am not lazy O.O KKK. I don\'t think well when I am hungry! Haha Just kidding. Well, I am actually happy to read your composition. I really laughed aloud when I read it haha. Sooooo funny. Anyway. Let\'s talk about it tomorrow, okay? And thank you for showing this to me, it means you really are reading my feedback; and that really makes me happy. ~t.Karen ^.^ WORD OF THE DAY:  \"SALVAGE\"- verb  Pronunciation: [pruh-nuhn-see-ey-shuhn]  Meaning: The act of saving anything from danger, fire etc.  kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk  Look at your pronunciation writing. >> ** Consider sentence revision. >> Look at the pronunciation that you have placed.  You wrote pronunciation\'s pronunciation.kkkkkkk >> ** Make the sentence a lot clearer by revising the construction of your statement. >> You wrote [pruh-nuhn-see-ey-shuhn] for the word\'s pronunciation.  You are so funny! Kkkkkkkkkk >> Correct!  ^^  In addition, I didn\'t tell you a thing more and your last Friday\'s feedback word \"ENTICE\" was thesame to your feedback\'s word the day before.kkkkkkk >> ** Make the sentence a lot clearer by revising the construction of your statement. >> In addition, I didn\'t tell you that last Friday\'s feedback, the word\'Entice\' was also the same as the day before.  Why did you the same word? Kk >> ** You forgot to use the verb  \'use\' to make your sentence\'s thought complete. >> Why did you use the same word?  Are you lazy? Kkkkkkkk >> Correct! ^^  I just kidding you. >> ** Don\'t forget your verb \'am\'. >> I\'m just kidding you. kk It\'s so funny. >> Correct! ^^  See you funny teacher! ^^ >> Correct! ^^

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