klein. homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[1] Provide examples with the correct usages of the following:TOO, EITHER, NEITHERDO/DON'T, DOES/DOESN'T
1) - I love my dogs. And I believe they love me too.
- My friend sun-young likes to go abroad for tour. And I love traveling either.
- Many people think Donald Trump is weird. Neither do I.
2) - A man had a plan to pop the question saying that “I do love you. honey. will you marry me?” But something was wrong. When he tried to say that, his girl friend stopped him suddenly . “Honey, Don’t be. I am so sorry but I meet someone else now.” “No. It doesn’t be true.” He felt his heart breaking. Yeh. He really does.
[2] Answer the following questions by relating your experience.Do you always see eye to eye with your family? How about with your friends?
I think I am kind of opinionated person, especially when I think I am right.
Frankly speaking, I thought exact information is more important than feelings.
But I realize that many people think I disagree with but them not their opinion. Even they think they are right because I opposed that. Therefore the opposite opinion doesn't help them. So I lately try to say “You are right, That's a good idea.” If they want me to give them some advices, only then I tell them other options gently. It’s not easy.. but I am trying to..
ps: I tried to write in brief. But I am kind of talkative maybe..
Sorry again. Good night^^
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!
Please do not be sorry for writing a long composition. I love it!
Thank you for expressing your mind freely. For sure, you will reach greater heights. Mark my words, my friend.
You know what I am particularly drawn to the story that you have written below. Did you base that on a true story? Oh my, I will definitely ask you about it in a while. I am quite excited to speak with you again!
I admire how you expressed yourself here. I got to know you a little better, [이름]. That\'s such a revelation!I hope to learn more from you from our class and from your compositions. Again, thank you!
Please wait for my call at 8:00. Let\'s have another sound conversation.
Until then!
-Klein-
P.S.
Please find time to review the recommendations below. May you find them handy.
[1] Provide examples with the correct usages of the following:TOO, EITHER, NEITHERDO/DON\'T, DOES/DOESN\'T1) - I love my dogs. And I believe they love me too.
>>Correct
OR >> I love my dog, and I believe they love me too.- My friend sun-young likes to go abroad for tour. And I love traveling either.
>>My friend, Sun-young, likes going abroad for a tour, and I love travelling too.
>>My friend, Sun-young, doesn\'t like going abroad for a tour, and I don\'t like travelling either.- Many people think Donald Trump is weird. Neither do I.
>>Many people do not think Donald Trump is weird. Neither do I.2) - A man had a plan to pop the question saying that “I do love you. honey. will you marry me?”
>>A man had a plan to pop the question, saying, \"I do love you, honey. Will you marry me?\"
But something was wrong. When he tried to say that, his girl friend stopped him suddenly .
>>Correct!
“Honey, Don’t be. I am so sorry but I meet someone else now.”
>>\"Honey, don\'t be.. (surprised). I am so sorry buy I am meeting someone else now.\"
“No. It doesn’t be true.”
>>\"No. It is not true!\"
>>\"No. That is not true!\"
He felt his heart breaking. Yeh. He really does.>>Correct[2] Answer the following questions by relating your experience.Do you always see eye to eye with your family? How about with your friends?I think I am kind of opinionated person, especially when I think I am right.>>I think I am kind of an opinionated person, especially when I think I am right.
Frankly speaking, I thought exact information is more important than feelings.
>>CorrectBut I realize that many people think I disagree with but them not their opinion.
>>But I realize that many people think I disagree with them not their opinion.
Even they think they are right because I opposed that.
>>They even think they are right because I oppose that.
Therefore the opposite opinion doesn\'t help them. So I lately try to say “You are right, That\'s a good idea.”
>>Correct
If they want me to give them some advices, only then I tell them other options gently.
>>If they want me to give them some advice, only then will I tell them other options gently.
It’s not easy.. but I am trying to..>>Correct!ps: I tried to write in brief. But I am kind of talkative maybe..
Sorry again. Good night^^
>>Correct!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.