klein. its homework. i am late again.
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Key Pattern Review with John's help it can be done.
1. Complete the fill-in-the-blanks using "With his help, it can be done.“ and compare answers with your tutor.
1) With you by my side, I can go without loneliness
2) With _your help, I can easily overcome my pain.
3) With my tutor’s help, our plans will succeed.
4) With a team like this, _our challenge succeeded._!
2. Activities
1) Think of a group project for an event. Pick your team members and explain how they could be useful.
- ok. let me assume there are some people with me.
and I will choose the subject to helping neighbors.
I think if there are someone who had gotten other’s help, it will be helpful by sharing their experiences. what was helpful and what was embarrassed and what was the problems.
And if there is a person who tried to help others, sharing his or her ideas will be useful either.
If they felt lack of system or human resources or understanding of recipients, etc.. we could try to figure out how to solve them.
2) If there is a person who has difficulty in quitting smoking, how would you help him quit?
I will tell him like this way..
I think bad imagination is helpful to quit some bad habits. if you still like smoking, even though you try not to smoke, I think it might not be easy.
But if you imagine that you hate the smell of cigarette, and it smells like disgusting, and it makes your teeth and lung dirty-black, and try to act vomiting when you imagine smoking. I am sure it is getting easier to avoid this dirty things. (no offence. you know that?) My father quitted it with this way definitely.
3) When you have any trouble at work/school, who might be able to help you?
I am afraid but there are no person to help me out about work.
I have to find out and decide the solution by alone.
Of course I can google that or read books to know how to, but the decisions is mine, all the times.
Because I don't want to feel regrets and nobody knows about the future.
About work, there are no one to help me solving the problems, but the other things I always ask to others their opinions. I think the more is the better.
4. Are you afraid of your own shadow?
I am afraid of my own shadow if I died being a loser in the future.
If there are nothing to satisfied with, and what if my life is like Scrooge.. it will terrifying. I know life is short and no one knows what happens tomorrow. I don’t want to live selfish, but I need to more courage to start my plans. God, please give me more courage to step out. I need you.
PS: I am very encouraged to your letter, klein. thank you so much. lets try to learn all this four areas in English.
anyway.. I dumped the stuff in my refrigerator.. then I called the delivery food.
so my refrigerator are full with the food again. hahaha
But don't worry. it is fresh now.
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Stay safe and sound, my friend.
Eat a lot!
-Klein-
Key Pattern Review with John\'s help it can be done.>>Correct
OR >> Key Patter Review: With John\'s help it can be done.1. Complete the fill-in-the-blanks using \"With his help, it can be done.“ and compare answers with your tutor.1) With you by my side, I can go without loneliness
>>Correct2) With _your help, I can easily overcome my pain.
>>Correct3) With my tutor’s help, our plans will succeed.
>>Correct4) With a team like this, _our challenge succeeded._!>>Correct
OR >> With a team like this, our challenge will succeed.2. Activities1) Think of a group project for an event. Pick your team members and explain how they could be useful.- ok. let me assume there are some people with me. and I will choose the subject to helping neighbors.
>> Ok. Let me assume there are some people with me and I will choose the subject to help our neighbors.I think if there are someone who had gotten other’s help, it will be helpful by sharing their experiences. what was helpful and what was embarrassed and what was the problems.
>> I think if there is someone who had gotten other\'s help, it will be helpful by sharing his experiences - what were helpful, embarrassing, and the problems. And if there is a person who tried to help others, sharing his or her ideas will be useful either.
>> And if there is a person who tried to help others, sharing his or her ideas will be useful too.If they felt lack of system or human resources or understanding of recipients, etc.. we could try to figure out how to solve them.>> If they felt lack of system, human resource or understanding of recipients, etc., we could try to figure out how to solve them.2) If there is a person who has difficulty in quitting smoking, how would you help him quit?I will tell him like this way..
>>I will talk to him this way.I think bad imagination is helpful to quit some bad habits.
>> Correct
if you still like smoking, even though you try not to smoke, I think it might not be easy.
>> Correct (capitalization: If)
But if you imagine that you hate the smell of cigarette, and it smells like disgusting, and it makes your teeth and lung dirty-black, and try to act vomiting when you imagine smoking.
>> But if you imagine that you hate the smell of cigarette and it is disgusting, and it makes your teeth and lungs dirty black, try acting like you\'re vomiting when you imagine smoking.
I am sure it is getting easier to avoid this dirty things. (no offence. you know that?)
>> I am sure it is getting easier to avoid these dirty things.
My father quitted it with this way definitely.>> My father quit it this way definitely.3) When you have any trouble at work/school, who might be able to help you?I am afraid but there are no person to help me out about work.
>>I am afraid there is no person who helps me out about work.I have to find out and decide the solution by alone.
>>I have to find out and decide on the solution by myself.
>> I have to find out and decide on the solution alone.Of course I can google that or read books to know how to, but the decisions is mine, all the times.
>>Of course, I can google that or read books to know how to, but the decisions are mine all the time.Because I don\'t want to feel regrets and nobody knows about the future.
>>This is because I don\'t want to feel regrets and nobody knows about the future.About work, there are no one to help me solving the problems, but the other things I always ask to others their opinions.
>>About work, there is no one to help me solve the problem; but there are other things like I can always ask for others\' opinions.
I think the more is the better.>>I think the more, the better.4. Are you afraid of your own shadow?I am afraid of my own shadow if I died being a loser in the future.>>Correct
If there are nothing to satisfied with, and what if my life is like Scrooge.. it will terrifying.
>>If there is nothing to be satisfied with and my life is like Scrooge\'s, it will be terrifying.
I know life is short and no one knows what happens tomorrow.
>>Correct
I don’t want to live selfish, but I need to more courage to start my plans.
>>I don\'t want to live selfishly but I need more courage to start my plans.
God, please give me more courage to step out. I need you.>>CorrectPS: I am very encouraged to your letter, klein.
>>I am so encouraged by your letter, Klein.
thank you so much.
>>Correct (capitalization: Thank)
lets try to learn all this four areas in English.
>>Let\'s try to learn all these four areas in English.anyway.. I dumped the stuff in my refrigerator.. then I called the delivery food.
>>Anyway, I dumped the stuff in my refrigerator, then I called for food delivery.so my refrigerator are full with the food again. hahaha
>>So my refrigerator is full with food again.But don\'t worry. it is fresh now.
>>Correct (punctuation mark)
OR >> But don\'t worry, it is fresh now.
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