Know what I want to do
학생이 쓴 원문
Many adults usually talk to youth about the employment, first important thing is it\'s stable or not.
I think someone looking for a job to only company, I agree too.
But my personal opinion is what is my dream, know what I want to do.
That is most important thing.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Yes, we should pursue our dreams. Eventually it will all be worth it. There\'s actually a saying that if you love doing something, you will never work a single day in your life again.
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Many adults usually talk to youth about the employment, first important thing is it\'s stable or not.
>> Many adults usually talk to the youth about employment. The most important thing to consider is whether it is stable.
I think someone looking for a job to only company, I agree too.
>> I think that looking for a stable company is a good thing.
But my personal opinion is what is my dream, know what I want to do.
>> But in my personal opinion, I want to do what I want to do.
That is most important thing.
>> That is the most important thing.
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