Knowing English well

2016-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Now is the era of globalization. Global business is needed to all the people in the world. In that sense, knowing other language well is very important. Because there can be trade anywhere in the world. Also, we can learn the other country's study. It is the motif to be level up our knowledge. And then, many student have been studying to go to advanced country. University gradually increasing to lecture on English in Korea. To speak English fluent and to knowing English well is equivalent to a college degree. Especially they can have a choice to find employment from over the sea. We must be acknowledge the fact which English is a world common language. Knowing the foreign language is same to broaden his knowledge.

강사 첨삭


Hi there sir,

An amazing Monday sir!

English could be a bridge to connect the gap between countries and people. We know that. But things are changing. There seems to be a power shift going on right now, do you think English should be changed as the language of business and science? It\'s just something to think about. Anyway sir, thank you for always doing your part as a student. I salute you for that! Enjoy your China trip! See you!
Take care!

~T. Lynn

Now is the era of globalization.

>> correct!

Global business is needed to all the people in the world.

>> Global business is needed for all the people in the world.

In that sense, knowing other language well is very important.

>>correct!

Because there can be trade anywhere in the world.

>>Because you can trade anywhere in the world.

Also, we can learn the other country\'s study.

>> Also, we can learn about other countries through studying.

It is the motif to be level up our knowledge.

>>It is a way to increase our knowledge.

And then, many student have been studying to go to advanced country.

>> Many students have been studying to go to another country.

University gradually increasing to lecture on English in Korea.

>> Universities are gradually increasing English lectures in Korea.

To speak English fluent and to knowing English well is equivalent to a college degree.

>> To speak English fluently and to know English well is equivalent to a college degree.

Especially they can have a choice to find employment from over the sea.

>> They can have a choice to find employment from over seas.

We must be acknowledge the fact which English is a world common language.

>>We must acknowledge the fact that English is the world\'s common language.

Knowing the foreign language is same to broaden his knowledge.

>> Knowing the foreign language is the same as broadening our knowledge.

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