Knowing Is Not Enough; We Must Apply. Wishing Is Not Enough;
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People are living nowadays are under the sea of information. It is not difficult get an information from the internet. It is more important to understand what I know than the things we can find out any information from the internet. Of course, Knowing is not enough, If we do not apply the things we know, It is meaningless. I know many people who have much knowledge.
For example, one of my friends know very well about what makes his wife happy. However he does not apply what he knows.
For a similar reason, wishing is not enough. People must act and do what they wish.
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I hope that you will continue doing it because this is also a good help for you to improve your English skills.
~ T. Lorna ^-^
>> People nowadays are living under the sea of information.
It is not difficult get an information from the internet.
>> Though it is not difficult to get an information from the internet.
It is more important to understand what I know than the things we can find out any information from the internet.
>> I think that what I know is more important than the things or information that we can find from the internet.
Of course, Knowing is not enough, If we do not apply the things we know, It is meaningless.
>> Of course knowing is not enough because even if we know a lot of things and we do not apply it, then it\'s meaningless.
I know many people who have much knowledge.
>> I know many people who are so knowledgeable about a lot of things.
For example, one of my friends know very well about what makes his wife happy.
For example, one of my friends know very well about what makes his wife happy.
>> One of them is my friend who knows very well how to make his wife happy.
However he does not apply what he knows.
>> However, he doesn\'t apply what he knows.
For a similar reason, wishing is not enough.
For a similar reason, wishing is not enough.
>> Similarly, wishing also is not enough.
People must act and do what they wish.
>> Correct!
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