KNOWING WHAT TO BUY

2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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What are you going to buy? I`m going to buy a new pencil. Would you like to buy some eraser too? Oh,I need to buy erasers and pencil case. Let`s go to the bookstore and buy those things. How about you? Are you going to buy some books. I`ll buy some books and rule.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Thank you for doing your homework. I can see that you have a good foundation in grammar and sentence construction. However, they\'re are a few slips on your sentences and questions but so far you have done a good job! Keep it up! :)   Teacher Sarah   What are you going to buy?I`m going to buy a new pencil. >> CORRECT OR: I need to buy a new pencil. Would you like to buy some eraser too?Oh,I need to buy erasers and pencil case.>> Oh yes, I need to buy erasers and a pencil case. Let`s go to the bookstore and buy those things.>> CORRECT OR: Let\'s go to the bookstore then and buy those things. How about you?Are you going to buy some books.>> Are you going to buy some books?I`ll buy some books and rule. >> Yes, I\'ll buy some books and ruler.

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