Knowledge..
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I think knowledges from book are more important than from others.
In the world, There are many knowledges in the world.
but people can't tell important knowledges from ... knowledges well.
Knowledges from books have clear source orgin.
and they are professional and deep.
So, reading books is good to know many important knowledges.
ps. It's my first time to do homework.. It's difficult.. T_T
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I think knowledges from book are more important than from others.
>> I think knowledge from books is more important than the others.In the world, There are many knowledges in the world.
>> There are many kinds of knowledge in this world.but people can\'t tell important knowledges from ... knowledges well.
>> But people can\'t tell what the important knowledge is from the not-so-important ones.
OR >> But people can\'t tell which knowledge is more important.Knowledges from books have clear source orgin.
>> The knowledge from books have a clear source and origin.and they are professional and deep.
>> They are also more professional and deep.So, reading books is good to know many important knowledges.>> So reading books is a good way to learn different and important kinds of knowledge.
Or >> We can learn a lot of knowledge from books.
ps. It\'s my first time to do homework..
>> It\'s my first time to do my homework.
It\'s difficult.. T_T
>> CORRECT
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