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2010-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

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It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why I truly believe in the saying "Seeing is believing." People says as well "Human being is a learning animal." As i have grown, I have been trying to learn and understand many things from the books either in school, home, or in private institute. Looking back, only small things of those were soaked into my memories. I think The things that I can clearly remember have been memorized by my senses. Looking back, only small things of those were soaked into my memories. I think The things that I can clearly remember have been memorized by my senses.

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Hello [이름], I see you are brishing up on your writing skills. Keep up the good work. Here are the corrections I left for you. Talk to you later. -RJ- It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." >>correct Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. >>correct In your opinion, which source is more important? Why >>correct I truly believe in the saying "Seeing is believing." People says as well "Human being is a learning animal." >> I truly believe in the saying "Seeing is believing." People say as well "Human beings are learning animals." As i have grown, I have been trying to learn and understand many things from the books either in school, home, or in private institute. >> As I have grown, I have been trying to learn and understand many things from the books either in school, home, or in private institutes.Looking back, only small things of those were soaked into my memories. >> Looking back, only small things of those I have learned were soaked into my memories. I think The things that I can clearly remember have been memorized by my senses. >>correct

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