Kocher is the portable pan for camping.

2010-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Kocher is the portable pan for camping. When we go to camp, we have the burner, the kocher and knapsack. It is the most cold today in this year. It is -15 degree. My cellular phone is out of order today, I am the customer center now. Because I am boring to wait, I am studying now.

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Hello [이름]!!   I tried looking for the Kocher online but all I뭭e seen are related to science haha!! Kocher is a Swiss surgeon.. Anyway, maybe that뭩 a brand name.. What do you mean your cellular phone is out of order? You mean no battery? I hope it will be ok later for our class.. See ya!   Xoxoxo, T. Shy   It is the most cold today in this year.>> It is the coldest day of this year. I am the customer center now.>> I am in the customer center  now. Because I am boring to wait, I am studying now. >> Because I am bored waiting, I am studying now.

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