Kongjwipatjwi~^^
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a story called Kongjwipatjwi, but it is a story of a child named Kongjwi, whose mother died and adopted a stepmother, and after that, after being bullied by the step-sisters, he fell into the eyes of Sato and lives happily again. The step-sister is named patjwi, so it is called Kongjupatjwi. It was a moving story because it was a story that taught the lesson that we should really do filial piety.
P.S It is too short...but this is real story~
강사 첨삭
Hi there Maria!
I thought this story is just like Cinderella, however, this happened in real life. Well, as for the the definition of folk tale, these are stories that are not necessarily true but have been passed to generations over time. So let\'s see if this passes as a folk tale tomorrow when we go over the paragraph and topic on our book.
Thanks for this interesting story!
See you in class then.
-T. Donna =)
>> It\'s a story called Kongjwipatjwi, but it is a story of a child named Kongjwi whose mother died and was adopted by a stepmother. After that, after being bullied by the step-sisters, he fell into the eyes of Sato and lives happily again.
The step-sister is named patjwi, so it is called Kongjupatjwi.
>> The step-sister is named Patjwi, soshe is called Kongjupatjwi.
It was a moving story because it was a story that taught the lesson that we should really do filial piety.
>> Correct!
P.S It is too short...but this is real story~
P.S It is too short...but this is real story~
>> Correct!
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