Korea have special food for thanksgiving day.
학생이 쓴 원문
Korea have special food for thanksgiving day.
We prepare the food for our ancestor and make a table on that day.
Especailly, I like to eat dduck-guk called "rice cake soup" in Korean.
It taste nutty and have a chewy texture.
and We have special thanksgiving's cake called it as song-pyun.
It have an important meaning that every family member who live apart gather in the house cook and eat together.
We put the specail suace into it such as mashed adzuki bean, sugar or something if desired.
My grandmother would prepare pine tree's leaves and put them in pot's bottom when song-pyun were cooked.
It makes us smell fragrant with our mouth full of it.
But I can't remember the last time when extensive family have made it together.
As my grandmother has alzheimer's disease, she's stayed in hospital for her specail treatment and care from doctor and nurses for a few years.
Whenever we met, we droped by her hospital and made her out for seeing the sea, mountain and other sightseeing.
강사 첨삭
A great day to you [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking your time in making this composition for me.^^
I learned a lot about your culture as I was reading this.
I want to talk more about it in our class.
Take care always and see you soon.^^
--- T. Anne
Korea have special food for thanksgiving day.
>> Korea has special food for the thanksgiving day.We prepare the food for our ancestor and make a table on that day.>> We prepare the food and the table for our ancestors on that day.
Especailly, I like to eat dduck-guk called \"rice cake soup\" in Korean.>> I especially like to eat dduck-guk which is rice cake soup in Korea.It taste nutty and have a chewy texture.
>> It tastes nutty and has a chewy texture.and We have special thanksgiving\'s cake called it as song-pyun.
>> We have a special thanksgiving\'s cake called \"song-pyun\".It have an important meaning that every family member who live apart gather in the house cook and eat together.
>> It has an important meaning that every family member who lives apart gather in the house to sook and eat together.We put the specail suace into it such as mashed adzuki bean, sugar or something if desired. >> We put special sauces into it such as mashed adzuki bean, sugar or anything that is desired.
My grandmother would prepare pine tree\'s leaves and put them in pot\'s bottom when song-pyun were cooked.
>> My grandmother would prepare pine tree needles and put them in the pot\'s bottom when song-pyun is being cooked.It makes us smell fragrant with our mouth full of it.
>> It makes us smell the aroma when our mouth is full of it.But I can\'t remember the last time when extensive family have made it together.
>> But I can\'t remember the last time when my extended family have made it together.As my grandmother has alzheimer\'s disease, she\'s stayed in hospital for her specail treatment and care from doctor and nurses for a few years.
>> Since my grandmother has alzheimer\'s disease, she\'s stayed in hospital for her special treatment and care from the doctor and nurses for a few years.Whenever we met, we droped by her hospital and made her out for seeing the sea, mountain and other sightseeing.
>> Whenever we met, we drop by her hospital and bring her out to see the sea, mountain and other sceneries.
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