Korea is best country in the world
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I am a Korean, that\'s why I think Korea is best country in the world.
Because Korea is very safety country.
People doesn\'t care other people things.
And sometimes it\'s dangerous but there\'s no problem walking around late at night.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann!
Yes, everyone should have love for their country.
I think I am a Korean, that\'s why I think Korea is best country in the world.
>> Since I am [Name], I think that South Korea is the best country in the world.
Because Korea is very safety country.
>> It is because it is very safe here.
People doesn\'t care other people things.
>> People don\'t care about other things.
And sometimes it\'s dangerous but there\'s no problem walking around late at night.
>>Sometimes it\'s dangerous but there\'s no problem when it comes to walking around late at night.
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