Korea is well known for typhoon in summer.

2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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When it comes to summer season, we have a lot of rain fall. Sometimes, it becomes bigger so the flood is generated. In addition this, typhoon is coming from south ocean. It's a big disater that it comes a result of many damage of nature and takes out the lives of many people. if we only except it, Korea is nice place to live.

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Korea is well known for typhoon in summer. When it comes to summer season, we have a lot of rain fall.
Sometimes, it becomes bigger so the flood is generated.
In addition this, typhoon is coming from south ocean.
It\'s a big disater that it comes a result of many damage of nature and takes out the lives of many people.
if we only except it, Korea is nice place to live.


Korea is well known for typhoon in Summer. When summer season comes, we experience heavy rains so the flood is generated. In addition to this, typhoon usually comes from the South part of the ocean. It is a big disaster, and can caused damage of nature, also it can take lives of many people. Except this natural calamity, Korea is a very nice place to live in.

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