Korea (part2)
학생이 쓴 원문
Well,then...what is your ideas about impressive places in Korea? Is it the Harry Potter cafe? or is it starfield library? It can be other places!It can be a store ,lake or a bridge. There can many impressive places,. So, you can choose 3 places you think are the most impressive.
강사 첨삭
Hi Rose. Here is the second part. Thank you! Have a good day ahead!
T. Matt
Well,then...what is your ideas about impressive places in Korea?
>>Well then, what are your ideas about impressive places in Korea?
Is it the Harry Potter cafe? or is it starfield library?
>>Is it the Harry Potter Cafe or is it Starfield Library?
It can be other places!
>>Correct
It can be a store ,lake or a bridge.
>>It can be a store , a lake or a bridge.
There can many impressive places,.
>>There can be many impressive places.
So, you can choose 3 places you think are the most impressive.
>>So, you can choose three (3) impressive places that are most impressive.
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