Korea’s educational competition…
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Korea\'s educational competition is structured in a way that teaches that only those who study well can succeed. In Korea, studying is always the first, and even if you have a dream, you have to study hard to achieve it. Infusion education in Korea is famous. Especially, in Daechi-dong city, Seoul, most elementary school students finish their high school education. Korea\'s education competition is a fight between parents.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Korea\'s educational competition is structured in a way that teaches that only those who study well can succeed.
>>> CORRECT!
In Korea, studying is always the first, and even if you have a dream, you have to study hard to achieve it.
>>> CORRECT!
Infusion education in Korea is famous.
>>> CORRECT!
Especially, in Daechi-dong city, Seoul, most elementary school students finish their high school education. Korea\'s education competition is a fight between parents.
>>> CORRECT!
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