" KOREA'S TOP UNIVERSITY STRUGGLES TO ATTRACT FOREIGN STUDENTS "
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This article explains to struggle attracting foreign students at SNU.
>> This article explains the struggle of attracting foreign students at SNU.
But It\'s not only including SNU. I think that this is telling most of university in South korea.
>> But it\'s doesn\'t only include SNU. I think it tells us about most of the university in South Korea.
Even thought professor is competent,
>> Even though professors are competent.
It would be difficult to teach foreign students.
>> Correct
Becasue professor is almost not native speaker for English.
>> Because the professor is not a native English speaker.
It might be limited to explan professional knowledge to foreigner and couldn\'t be described as detatiled information.
>> The explanation of professional knowledge to foreign students is limited and detailed information can\'t be conveyed.
It\'s not sure that this is just my opinion. by the way, I might understand foreign student\'s mind.
>> This is just my opinion. However, I might understand foreign student\'s mind.
When they come to SNU for studying, there are goal, dream and plan but the reality is not good.
>> When they come to study at SNU, they have goal, dream and plan but the reality is not good.
Obviously, anyone disppointed. This is current status. We need to acknowledge wrong curriculum.
>> Obviously, it is disappointing. This is the current status. We need to acknowledge that it is a wrong curriculum..
To be changed new educational system for foreign students.
>> It has to be changed into a new educational system for foreign student.
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