korea song

2011-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Erica

학생이 쓴 원문

hey how are u today? i have so many things to share with you today in class about blind date. anyway i'd like you to sing a song for chrismas is 'THE FIRT NOEL'by pakr jung hyun. you might can listen this song on utube. let me know if you have problem with finding this song. hope u like it. have a great day and c u later ;)

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for your composition today. Please be guided by the correction below. hey how are u today? >> Correct.i have so many things to share with you today in class about blind date. >> Correct.anyway i\'d like you to sing a song for chrismas is \'THE FIRT NOEL\'by pakr jung hyun. >> Anyway, I\'d like you to sing the Christmas song \"The First Noel\" by Park Jung Hyun. you might can listen this song on utube. let me know if you have problem with finding this song.>> You can listen to this song on YouTube. Let me know if you have difficulty in looking for this song.hope u like it. >> Correct.have a great day and c u later ;) >> Correct.  

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·