Korea vs Japan
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
This one is good news.
I hope your team wins.
Tell me the result next week.
Have a great night a fantastic weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Today it will be big competition.It is Korean baseball team vs Japan baseball team.
>> There is a big competition today between Korea and Japan baseball team.
Under 24years old or 3years worked at Pro baseball team can participate.
>> Athletes under 24 years old or those who played for 3 years in the professional baseball team can participate.
Korea pitcher will be Jang Hyeon Sik.The match will be at 7 in the Dokyo stadium.
>> Korea\'s pitcher will be Jang Hyeon Sik. The match will be at 7 (am/pm) in Dokyo stadium.
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