korea weahter

2020-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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korea\'s weather is raining for weeks. here and there have a problem. houses and mount was broken down . river was run over. river which is my house nearby was run over. so esplanade was submerged. and old woman was died . maybe she walked a esplanade . I was suppried that some peoples were walking the esplanade last weekend. river was about almost same height. I heard this wether has been continued for 48days. Normally August is holiday season in korea . but This year was rainning everydays. I was very sad. I coludn`t go to Thailand at Feb because of corona virus. I coludn`t go summer Holiday I think Climate Change changed Korea weather . ## The next writing is my thoughts. I lost self-confidence . I thought Free Talking was helpful in learning english. I prepared ready english writing before class. but I was hard my class. I am sorry for making you difficult. nowaday I guess you are hard because my class.

강사 첨삭

korea\'s weather is raining for weeks.

>>> Korea\'s weather has been raining for weeks.
here and there have a problem.

>>> There are problems everywhere.

houses and mount was broken down .

>>> Houses and mountains were damaged.

river was run over. river which is my house nearby was run over.

>>> The river has overflown. The river near my house also overflow.

So esplanade was submerged. and old woman was died .

>>> So the esplanade was submerged in water and an old woman died.

maybe she walked a esplanade .

>>> She was probably walking on the esplanade.
I was suppried that some peoples were walking the esplanade last weekend.

>>> I was surprised that some people were walking on the esplanade last weekend.

river was about almost same height.

>>> The flood was on the same level as the river.
I heard this wether has been continued for 48days.

>>> I heard this weather has been continuing for 48 days.

Normally August is holiday season in korea .

>>> Normally, August is a holiday season in Korea.

but This year was rainning everydays.

>>> But it has been raining everyday this year.
I was very sad.

>>>correct
I coludn`t go to Thailand at Feb because of corona virus.

>>> I couldn`t go to Thailand last February because of corona virus.

I coludn`t go summer Holiday

>>> I couldn\'t go on a summer holiday.
I think Climate Change changed Korea weather .

>>> I think climate change has changed the weather in Korea.

Hello Sir John. You just need to practice more on your sentences. Practice on clearly getting your thoughts or delivering your sentences efficiently. I think that is the only difficult part about it, I don\'t seem to really understand what you mean sometimes with your sentences. But anyway, it takes practice. You\'re doing fine. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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## The next writing is my thoughts.

>>> The next sentences are my thoughts.
I lost self-confidence .

>>> correct

I thought Free Talking was helpful in learning english.

>>> I thought Free Talking was helpful in learning English.

I prepared ready english writing before class. but I was hard my class.

>>> I prepared English sentences before the class but I was having a hard time in class.

I am sorry for making you difficult.

>>> I am sorry for making it difficult for you.

nowaday I guess you are hard because my class.

>>> Nowadays, I guess you are having a hard time because of my class.

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