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Bullying in a school recently became a huge issue after one student suicided falling down on the top of his aprtment. This student left a letter before he killed himself. It is written he was bullied by some students who asked him to get them some snack every breaktime. Moreover they beated him so manytime. Beside that, there were numerous bullying. As these bullying is happening in korea, the government are trying to figure out how it is solved. They are making laws that they think these laws can work out but that is very stupid ideas. What i think is unless they get into their school life , they must not make a practical law. They are pretending to work for citizens but their intention must be for their fame for sure. I know i am very sarcastic for them but we should accept this fact. To solve buyying issue in korea, they should accuse bullying students of more strict sentence to prevent another crimes in korea.

  Good Evening [이름], It is true that bullying is becoming a huge problem not just in Korea but also to other countries. There are laws that are being implemented and I think Koorea can adopt some laws from other countries that are effective. You are not being sarcastic instead you are just expressing your thought. I hope to read more from you! See you! T. Sheela  Bullying in a school recently became a huge issue after one student suicided falling down on the top of his aprtment. >> Bullying in school recently became a huge issue after one student committed  suicide from falling down from his aprtment. This student left a letter before he killed himself. >> Correct! It is written he was bullied by some students who asked him to get them some snack every breaktime. >>It was written that he was bullied by some students who asked him to get some snack for them every breaktime. Moreover they beated him so manytime. >> Moreover, they  beat him many times. Beside that, there were numerous bullying. >> Correct! As these bullying is happening in korea, the government are trying to figure out how it is solved. >> Since bullying is happening in Korea, the government are trying to figure out how it is solved. They are making laws that they think these laws can work out but that is very stupid ideas. >> They are making laws that they think can work but they were a stupid ideas. What i think is unless they get into their school life , they must not make a practical law. >> I think, their ideas will be useless unless they get into the school, they must not make a practical law. They are pretending to work for citizens but their intention must be for their fame for sure. >> They are pretending that they are working for the goods of the citizens but their intention must be for their own fame for sure. I know i am very sarcastic for them but we should accept this fact. >> I know that I am very sarcastic toward them but we should accept this fact. To solve buyying issue in korea, they should accuse bullying students of more strict sentence to prevent another crimes in korea. >> To solver bullying in Korea, they should punish the bullies and implent a strict punishment to prevent another crime to happen in Korea.